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Title: Betrayal
Fandom: Original Fic
Words: 111
Prompt: Betrayal at [ profile] muse100

She sat on the ledge, tears long since gone, as she looked over the night sky. It was hard for her to believe that it was all over. She had thought that for the first time she honestly had a chance at happily ever after. Unfortunately, it didn't go quite as planned. He committed a betrayal against her that she didn't think she could ever forgive him for. He had done the worst thing you could ever do to a woman and now she had to repair the shattered pieces of her life.

Really. What kind of person would take the last chocolate brownie when his girlfriend is suffering from PMS?

Date: 2006-08-23 12:11 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile]

His body was found on the kitchen floor, illuminated by the gloomy light which spilled out of the open refrigerator.
That was the last betrayal he would ever commit.

Date: 2006-08-23 12:13 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile]
*grins* I thought you'd like that one. :)

*ponders adding your line to another fic because it's so good*

Date: 2006-08-23 12:19 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile]
*impish grin* It seemed like the natural conclusion.
I mean really, what was the guy thinking gettin' between a woman and her chocolate.

He had to have had a death wish...

Feel free to use the line :)

Date: 2006-08-23 12:20 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile]
*loves you*

He definitely did have to have one

Date: 2006-08-23 12:34 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile]
*mad giggles*

Oh that's good ;)


Date: 2006-08-23 12:43 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile]

I'm getting ready to post an angsty sad fic...


Date: 2006-08-23 12:43 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile]
The real betrayal would be letting her have the brownie, but drinking the last of the milk.

Re: *giggles*

Date: 2006-08-23 12:45 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile]
It's clear you've got a lot to learn about women, young padawan.
Screw the milk, gimme that brownie.

Re: *giggles*

Date: 2006-08-23 01:00 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile]
Yea, but when you're speaking in tongues and trying to get the chocolate deposit out of the roof of your'll be mumbling a different tune. I know chocolate is god during any moment at any time, but being comfortable and enjoying it is something else. At least I would think so. I mean would you rather enjoy a brownie of lucious chocolatey goodness on a busy, loud, noxious street in a city or on a soft, comfortable sofa, maybe some music playing, a couple of candles, maybe in front of a roaring fire on a bear skin rug...wait what were we talking about? ;)

Re: *giggles*

Date: 2006-08-23 01:08 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile]
I really am glad you guys like it. :)

Re: *giggles*

Date: 2006-08-23 01:18 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile]
it's short, it's simple, it's funny

it's awesome

Date: 2006-08-23 03:01 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile]
Hee! Love it!

Date: 2006-08-24 07:10 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile]
How fun! *grins*


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